Circulation
The wind is blowing fiercely
Trees are bending down
Summer thunder vigorous
Ozone all around
Winds of fall are gentler
Blowing leaves around
Anticipating winter
Wildlife food abounds
Winter wind is colder
Some creatures in the ground
Waiting out the cold time
Where they can’t be found
Springtime is renewal!
Birds fill the air with sound
Trees are sprouting finery
Beautiful world rebounds!
I like your rhyming scheme and the whole idea of circulation and renewal.
Thank you, Robert. It’s windy here today…
I’m a student of Nature. She is often my muse, and I’m still learning at her knee.
nice how you take us through the seasons… i like the gentle fall wind…so playful how he blows the leaves all over the place…
The wind is fierce here today- I’m about to get out into it, before sunset. Thank you.
a light and airy write…the rhyme scheme enables that…nice run through of the seasons…autumn or fall is def my fav….
i consider myself a student of nature as well…
i hope you take time to visit some of the other poets…
Brian. I’ve been doing some browsing- I’m liking what I’m finding. Still learning how to navigate…
thats cool…i know most poets would appreciate any word of encouragement…a line that you appreciated in what they wrote or how it made you feel…
it also gives back tot he community that we are all creating…
Promising… I can’t wait for spring!
…what a wonderful atmosphere you’ve just provided here… refreshingly tender & lovely… smiles…
p.s…. your descriptions of seasons are just good enough to make us want to feel its coming… smiles…
Thank you, kelvin. A tender and lovely lady inspired it.
this cycle and the gentleness of your meter and rhyme is great..
A tree for all seasons!
Thank you, Bjorn.
Really enjoyed the rhyme scheme — it made me read it aloud.
Thanks, billgncs. I like that you read it aloud. If possible, I pick a victim or two and read a new one out loud to them, and it sometimes points out sticky places in the rhythm.
I really like how you took us on a journey through the seasons. I like the rhyming and rhythm you used for your poem.
Very glad you liked it, coalkissed.
Brilliantly executed circle of life.
Thank you, poetrypea. “Circle of life” is appropriate- the poem was inspired by a phrase my daughter-in-law used, who is about two months from producing my first grandson.
I like the way the rhyme and meter helped us “circulate” through the seasons. Wonderfully done. Thank you.